Sunday, July 22, 2007

Personal Identity Revision




Here is the revision. I find it works better because it is more simplified. I also like it better because it is more geometric. Please let me know your thoughts. Thanks again.

3 comments:

Chris said...

hmmm... I think I liked the first one better, it was a little more compact. the cross/plus is the first thing I see in this one.

cvh said...

I do like this one better in concept for the same reasons you do. And I think it is just more interesting, or maybe the less obvious way to do it.

I do think that your logo doesn't have to immediately shout your initials. I find I really like logos where you have to stare at it a bit to pull the initials out of it.

It's like a little puzzle for the viewer, and it buys you additional seconds to burn the image into their brain.

All that said, the swoops on the letters look weird to me, and I think you need to retool it so that there's not a glowing plus sign in the middle.

mark said...

Thanks guys I will take that into account. I will work on that darn cross thing. But I am not so sure it is a bad thing:

“It is significant that the crucifix, aside from its religious implications, is a demonstration of perfect form…”
–Paul Rand

“And having disarmed the powers and authorities, he [Christ] made a public spectacle of them, triumphing over them by the cross.”
–Colossians 2:13-15